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It's 7 PM
there's a guy in a suit
giving a lecture about communism

a modern dressed girl is there
and I don't care
but she doesn't seem to listen

a very nice smile
is all it'd take
to convince me
of her meanings

forever regret
nothing I said
nothing I said seemed to
change things.

No, she didnt't seem to listen
she didn't seem to be there
even when I asked her name
she was not aware.

It's 9 PM
still the guy in a suit
is very busy talking

a modern dressed girl is there
still I don't care
I ask her if she wants to go drinking

 

a very nice smile
is all it'd take
to convince me
of her meanings

forever regret
nothing I said
nothing I said seemed to
change things.

No, she didnt't seem to listen
she didn't seem to be there
even when I asked her name
she was not aware.

 

 

Commentaar

Niet echt geslaagd.  De afwisselende functies van de zesde graad (zowel als tonica, subdominant en dominant) maken het nog beluisterbaar, maar dit is niet echt het soort song waar je een hele dag mee in je hoofd zit. 8/20

 

 

 

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